@Wsteria@tootplanet.space Having written three novels, my best advice is to get an outside editor, a writing group or a professional, and have them read and edit. Failing that, read it aloud to yourself and edit for rhythm at a minimum. Tracking plot points and story arcs is harder when you know what's going on, but if you can, read from scratch and track your plot externally to make sure you don't leave loose ends.
