You know, to be perfectly honest, if you REALLY want to do something to help my mood, there's something very specific I can ask for...
Go to http://egypt.urnash.com/parallax/ and tell us what you think. Constructive criticism, especially a DETAILED "I don't get what's going on here and here" would be super-welcome. And tell your friends.
We don't expect you all to read it regularly, but man, if anyone finds our work interesting -- or can explain why it's not -- I could sure stand to hear it today.
(Mostly at this stage, I guess we're just looking for opinions about the character designs and visuals and so forth, whether they made any semblance of sense. We're not quite far enough for there to really be much of a plot to make sense of yet, so we're not actually that surprised people have been quiet. n.n; )
@zebratron2084 I like it and am looking forward to seeing more!
Some of the text (mainly the green infoboxes) is a bit small & difficult to read -- but it looks like the pages are being shown smaller than their final presentation will be, so hopefully that's not really an issue.
I like the banter. I don't think I'm having any trouble following what's going on, tho obviously a lot of it is implied background that will emerge over time.
@woozle Forwarded to @anthracite (thusly). Thank you so much for the feedback!
@zebratron2084 @woozle in fact... having at least the dialogue captioned in plain text under the comic would be very helpful for many readers. or even having short descriptions of the scenes on the pages, as White Noise http://www.white-noise-comic.com/ does, adds a lot--there are many times it's helped me understand what's happening in a panel, or what I'm supposed to be paying attention to. and I'd love to volunteer to help with that! ;)
@green @woozle That's not a bad idea, forwarding to @anthracite. Or maybe in its final web form, we can have a full transcript linked from the same page.
@zebratron2084 Looks like the @anthracite mention didn't take. I see one at dragon.style; is that the one in question?
@woozle Oops, thanks! I'll just send her a link. n.n
@zebratron2084
I am interested in reading it, but I would be way more interested to wait and bingeread it after either it's over, or at least a huge arc is over. I can't really keep up with ongoing things too well. So in my case, the answer is patience, and spreading the word about when it's a good time to get into it for those who want to read a whole lot at once.
(Admittedly, we're aware that the storyline[s] have barely even gotten moving yet. And yes, we're aware that the webpage I linked to is kind of a mess -- it's honestly more of just a dump page for finished pages right now. The real action, such as it is, is on the Patreon!)