parallax
ok, you grown-up queer furries had BETTER like parallax, because i am not so sure the panel peg just drew is entirely suitable for kids :O
upped the emotional intensity of the story by about 300% though
fuck! i (unironically) hope she's proud, she even got a reaction out of the AUTHOR and i knew this plot element was coming
just... poignance lit with rocket fuel, holy shit
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@zebratron2084 i better start reading it then
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@KitRedgrave We can even give you a more current edition than we have up on the main page, let us know what you think!
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@zebratron2084 oh gosh thanks 
i'm pretty sure i'm already throwing money on the patreon
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@zebratron2084 oops, i forgot to pledge to the patreon actually. fixed it
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@KitRedgrave Thank you so much! And yeah, it's okay if it's a little confusing in the first chapter, there's gonna be a LOT more context about both societies in the second chapter!
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@KitRedgrave (Also, there are a lot of edits for clarity planned in the publication draft—do please let us know if there's any plot point you find really confusing or frustrating! That's exactly the sort of thing we're on the lookout for right now...)
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@zebratron2084 i will say that it was a little disorienting not really knowing what was going on with the characters -- they seem to be in one place, and then suddenly a totally different one looking different. though i can figure that's because they really are in two different places at once and different
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@KitRedgrave Hmm. That is kind of something we were concerned about. Could I trouble you for a couple of specific examples? We could probably either work on some stronger transitions or drop in some extra dialogue to fix it.
And thank you so, so very much for your feedback. We have been kinda starving for this. <3 I'm so glad it's at least looking good, but I am concerned we're running the story a little too fast for it to be easy to follow—this has been a concern of mine since the start...
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@KitRedgrave Oh! If you're talking about the bit where Kirt (bird) and Noa (pony) are having their first contact with the cat and mouse from the other side, while the Big Monstery Thing smashes stuff—yeah, that's a known issue. :D
That is indeed taking place in two places at once, and we have a note to tack a "meanwhile..." on that. :>
Sorry to flood you with text by the way, we're just so excited you're liking it! ^____^
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@zebratron2084 that was also kinda confounding, though i could kinda infer by them not immediately flipping out that it was happening somewhere else. definitely better to make that explicit!
this makes a lot more sense the next go-around reading it, but there's still a lot going on that's unexplained and packed in
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@KitRedgrave It is very very packed. :) I've been arguing that to @anthracite since the start, since she is very "aww, they'll puzzle it out!" about the whole thing. She kinda takes her perceptual skills for granted sometimes and forgets that I, for example, am not half as detail-oriented as her. :)
