parallax, request for crits
Hey, folks. Peg sent out another round of requests for comments and opinions from some of her comic-industry friends, so I thought I might as well share the request out and see if any of you would like to give our current work a skim...
https://egypt.urnash.com/parallax-1-preview/
In particular, if any of you care one way or the other, we're thinking of rewriting and expanding the first-encounter scene(s) to clarify them a little bit. Any details you can give us about any part of the plot you had trouble with would be very welcome. <3