@GoodNewsGreyShoes Thank you! I just worry the main action (orc goes right over dwarf's back) doesn't "read" and I should have used a different angle.

@Leucrotta Hmm - I see what you mean! 🤔 I think you're right that a different perspective might have made the "bowled over" bit easier to understand, but then you'd have lost the excellent head-on view of the dwarf's expression & the rabble of foes behind him.

You might still be able to make the "read" work from this view, tho:

What if, instead of being hunched down to "barrel thru" that orc, the dwarf was shown lifting his arm or shoulder, as if they'd "gone under & heaved" the orc upwards?

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@GoodNewsGreyShoes tried thumbnailing that and earlier in the process from the front, and the latter works I think.

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