parallax (~)
God, this dual-plot makes my brain hurt. I have absolutely no idea at this point if it's going to flow properly or not. This is by far the most complicated thing I've ever written. And I'm kind of proud of some of the good bits, I think there's real potential here, but I'm really starting to worry that I've bitten off more than I can chew. I haven't a clue if this is going to read okay, or be the least bit interesting, to anybody but Peg and me. Oh well, no turning back now.