parallax request!
Nobody's really said much about the comic so far—which is TOTALLY COOL, I have fallen behind on all my friends' projects too, and I UNDERSTAND. But if you are reading it and enjoying it, please let us know! And for those of you who have—thank you—we'd love to hear some more details about what you like and don't like!
We are at a real early developmental phase, and I AM NOT UNWILLING TO PANDER TO MY FRIENDS. Parallax was designed from the ground up to appeal to a young queer audience, with at least one trip to the "Frosting Factory" (eye candy, cute things, shipping opportunities) and one to the "Fireworks Factory" (fencing, fighting, torture, revenge...) per chapter.
So if there's anything you'd like to see come up in the comic—a pairing, a conflict, a weird species, an adventure scenario, a particular piece of TF bait—please do speak up! <3
And if there's something about it that's just not working for you, this is a CRUCIAL moment to let us know how we can change course. No pressure, but anything you can give us would be awesome. Thank you so much!
re: parallax request!
@zebratron2084 Reading and enjoying it! My main comment is that there doesn't feel like there are any strong narrative stakes until Liv gets knocked out?
Anything I'd like to see in the comic - a character's core beliefs being challenged?
The art is as always stellar but Peggy doesn't need to hear that :P
re: parallax request!, minor/speculative spoilers
@Aradia Oh, believe me, both of those are coming. :) The Vek story is deliberately a bit of a walk in the park so far, but it's going to (to borrow a phrase) escalate quickly once they [QUASI-SPOILER] encounter the Mixolynes...
But I think you could have a point, there might be a way to intensify it a little bit by making it clearer just how badly Liv's attempt to Embrace Her Destiny via the Vexalyne... sphere... thingy... has backfired.
And yeah, Kirt at the VERY least is gonna have their faith in their elders rumbled pretty horribly in Chapter 2! I think you will be pleased at the level of "um, maybe you should tell your elders to fuck right off" subversion that's coming. :> K's probably gonna come to blows with Liv over her cavalier attitude eventually, too...
Thank you so much for the input! <3 <3 <3 I owe you some Tegu stuff real soon...
