re: parallax request
@zebratron2084 It's certainly interesting, given how the concept went from Peggy's sense of humor to a different variation on that, matched with sincere hippy-dippy sentiment. I suspect the hippy-dippy sentiment is very much yours, and editing it would be a fix of staying in touch with that, no?
re: parallax request
@Leucrotta Well, it's more like needing to hit the pavement and actually give it a coherent plot structure. :) Turned out I have a LOT to learn about plotting and pacing... :O