Huh. Well, that's an interesting surprise.
https://www.comicon.com/2021/03/02/webcomic-weekly-parallax-a-tale-of-two-perspectives/
Pretty good review all in all, especially given that the pacing and clarity the reviewer mentions are a Known Issue.
Guess that clinches it, no matter how cynical I'd gotten over it, Parallax has potential. We just gotta figure out how the hell to fix and somehow find the time and focus to actually *do* it.
@zebratron2084 I wonder if you've chanced upon Brandon Sanderson's series of lectures on writing SF/fantasy? It does touch on how to make plots go places.
@zebratron2084 Sure! Here's the start of the playlist I've been following along: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0cf-qdZ7GbA&list=PLSH_xM-KC3Zv-79sVZTTj-YA6IAqh8qeQ&index=1