i think its cool to celebrate stuff like the Day of the Dead as someone who isnt hispanic, as long as u try to understand what it means to hispanic folks. like its a celebration of the dead as they were in life, and thats pretty cool!! we shouldnt be sad that they died, but happy that they lived, and thats really cool actually
cool PSA!! if you're having trouble with content warnings outside of flashing lights and such, think.... when you got the DiRT:
Disturbing: is the content disturbing, upsetting, or otherwise disquieting to the viewer?
Raunchy - is the content sexual or suggestive, or does it depict sexual body parts?
Touchy - is the content about a controversial or personal subject, such as politics or mental health?
...think twice! tag once! and always listen to your folks when they think a CW is needed
cool PSA!! if you're having trouble with content warnings outside of flashing lights and such, think.... when you got the DiRT:
Disturbing: is the content disturbing, upsetting, or otherwise disquieting to the viewer?
Raunchy - is the content sexual or suggestive, or does it depict sexual body parts?
Touchy - is the content about a controversial or personal subject, such as politics or mental health?
...think twice! tag once! and always listen to your folks when they think a CW is needed
sonic forces fist bump cover, by nougat. (clears throat)
* clicking noises bumps mic*
We can show the world .... what....
you are next to me and i'm next to you
duh duh duh duh until the BATTLES WOOOOOOOOOOOON buh dah doodoo
no ones gonna thing a thing to us!! into eachotherr we put our truss STANDING UN(voice cracks)ITED AFTER THE FIGHT IS ( breaks into coughing)
the character this brief excerpt describes is a key character in the early story that the main character has known for about a year, so like... ideally she should be putting in a jab or two? like, "in the same glaring shade of pink she wore every day"? from the reader's perspective it's like this person just appeared, in the main character's peripheral and then a year of apparently unreported knife-related assults passes in about two paragraphs, it's really, really ugly writing
listening to a video by Jenny Nicholson on a published(?!) Jeff the Killer fanfiction: https://youtu.be/DRD-CX9Uzwo
thinking: introducing a character is a really intricate process, and the writer really didn't know how to lead all the way through with it.
you get sentences like "she had on a pink shirt, pink skirt, and pink flip-flops" when you should really be describing initial judgements as succinctly and possible, like "she wore pink from head to toe". trim the fat, folks.
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